Excellent job Dakota keep it up. I like how you wrote down what you wanted to be when you grow up. Would you like to put your friends on your picture next time?
Good job Dakota. I find its easy to read what you wrote because the font is big for me to read and can see It.
I hope you make your dreams come true on what you wanted to do when you leave school
some of the photos were hard to see. like the one of the park. The photos were not big enough. For some of them and you couldn't really see what was happening.
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Excellent job Dakota keep it up. I like how you wrote down what you wanted to be when you grow up. Would you like to put your friends on your picture next time?
ReplyDeleteGood job Dakota. I find its easy to read what you wrote because the font is big for me to read and can see It.
ReplyDeleteI hope you make your dreams come true on what you wanted to do when you leave school
some of the photos were hard to see. like the one of the park. The photos were not big enough. For some of them and you couldn't really see what was happening.
Thank you Ruby and Kiesha. Yes Ruby I will make my photos bigger. Sure kiesha you can be in my slide one day
ReplyDeletewoow Dakota it's Dominique I no im not your friend but I really
ReplyDeletethink you are cool and wonderful and awesome and friendly!!!!!
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ReplyDeleteIt was fun when we went to Margret Mahy park and the art exhibition.
ReplyDeleteWow Dakota l like it keep it up..
ReplyDeletegreat job Dakota really good I like how you got different picture in one slide.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Dakota good job I really like your side it talking about your whanau. And it talk about what you are doing.
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