Friday, September 9, 2016
THE DAY THE CHIMP WENT TO SPACE!!!
HI, if you are new to my blogging this is a story about a chimp that went up to space. So what we had to do is watch a video of a chimpanzee going in to space, so we had to watch that video and also write a story about him. So we had to describe What,When,Why and Who we use these so we know what we are writing about, so please leave a comment on this post and I really did hope you enjoyed.
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Congrats Dakota! You have done a great story, and you also did a good job to finish it on time. You have good vocab and punctuation. What you could do next time is that you could make the text bigger and more pages, because you have some slides that your text is smaller than others.
ReplyDeleteThank you Aiden for the great fee back for sure I will do that next time.
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